Not so long back
you’d walked into my life
manipulated my heart
and took over all my time
That time is gone
it can never be regained
now just get out of my life
I’m starting over again
You said you’d love me
like no one ever can
that you’ll care and
always understand
you didn’t keep your word
gave heartache and pain
now just get out of my way
I’m starting over again
It’s been difficult
but life will be good again
If only Your smile, your voice
wasn’t still etched in my brain
like you disappeared
make your memories fade away
now just get out of my life
I’m starting over again
This poem has been written as a response to this week’s writing challenge starting over. It came out in a rush and reads a bit like a school girl’s work! but I decided to publish it nevertheless. Many of you already know I don’t like editing much and I am usually too lazy to scarp a draft and write again. Five minutes is all I get to blog! and I don’t want to waste that in writing drafts !!! Thank you for indulging me
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This is the worst part of a brake up!! Detox that man out of your system!
none there to be detoxed! fictional heartache jasmine…..
Well good I’d hate to see a fellow sister’ heart broken by a boy!!
or a man!!!!
Men don’t brake up with women in shady ways only boys do!
ha ha!!!! haven’t . by that definition not too many men present in this world!
Exactly!
Draft or no draft – whats heartfelt always touches a heart !
raw nerves are difficult to soothe !
This hit me between the eyes and in the heart. Wonderfully done against a challenge.
thanks so much Valentine! your comments always make my day!