I am trying to catch up.
Day 1 of Writing 201: Poetry – Prompt : Screen ; Form: Haiku; Device : Alliteration
Vilely, I call her name
Her valiant eyes defy me
Through the vigilant veil
or
Vilely, I call her name
Her virtuous eyes deny me
Through the vigilant veil
I love the economy of Haiku and am amazed by the way changing a couple of words changes the essence of the verse.
Pretty abstract thoughts.
pretty or abstract or both? 🙂 ha ha