Shame

Still playing catch up. Day Two:

Prompt: Gift  Form: Acrostic   Device: Simile

 

 

Silently her solemn eyes convey

Her inner strife

At six she has already seen the

Macabreness of life

Ending her innocence with a gift she didn’t ask for

 

 

Not been able to weave in a simile.

 

 

 

 

 

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4 Comments Add yours

  1. Moni says:

    aw. that hit me right in the gut. totally resonates.

    1. Thanks a bunch Moni! I love it when someone says that about a piece I have written

  2. Madan Saxena says:

    वाह . बहुत उम्दा,सुन्दर व् सार्थक प्रस्तुति
    कभी यहाँ भी पधारें और लेखन भाने पर अनुसरण अथवा टिपण्णी के रूप में स्नेह प्रकट करने की कृपा करें |
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    1. I will definitely visit you soon. Thanks

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